Currently I’m writing my master degree thesis on the topic “Liability of foreignness in Belt and Road Initiative”. The main idea is to analyze causes of LOF using the Belt and Road Initiative, what I try to prove is the fact that besides other LOF causes that were analyzed before in other papers one of the cause might be the misunderstanding of the investment project by the business partners from the host country (the country that is a potential beneficiary of the investment project). This idea started some time ago when I was doing a research on a potential topic for my master degree thesis, by that time while making some interviews for a different topic I realized that many business owners from East European countries don’t want to participate in the BRI mainly because they had a very weak understanding of this initiative thinking that is just a government to government project and is not connected to their businesses. They didn’t know that BRI includes much more business opportunities others than building the infrastructure of the member countries.
It is a qualitative study based on interviews findings. I have already a draft of about 80 pages of the paper, but I received comments from my supervisor that basically the paper needs to be changed because is not a master degree level. So I need help from a top writer for this. Mainly I need somebody to work on it to adjust it to be accepted for defense. The main changes need to be made in the Chapter 4 and 5 that include the Results and Findings and the Comments and Discussions.
The basic comments of the supervisor are:
“The biggest problem with your paper at the moment is that the conclusions and findings are too weak. They are not rooted in your interviews, but are general scientists talks, lacking generalization (title). You should use interview facts and data to describe the existence and manifestation of this LOF at least in the first part, and analyze the reasons in the second part. You should also quote the facts and data obtained from your interviews. The content so far is not as good as the summary you provided before starting to write this paper. The theoretical background is weak as well. So far I can’t accept it for defense.”
Now I need help in changing the Chapters 4 and 5.
Areas that need further improvement for the Chapters 4 and 5 are: (1) The Findings and results part needs to be further classified, where we have major categories that have sub-categories, for example, one category to include the reasons of the China’s side towards the destination country misunderstandings or the insufficient work done for the promotion/development of BRI (traditional LOF); the other category to include the reasons why the destination country government and the business community don’t understand (can have misunderstandings) regarding BRI, and later to summarize them in conclusions part. (2) Give interview facts, quote them in the text as a basis, and use different fonts.
The current result is rather disappointing because it has not unearthed the reasons for the destination country that caused the people of the destination country to misunderstand the BRI, so we need to improve the thesis from this point of view.
Please first see the draft to understand what is the amount of work that has to be done or what are the other options. Chapter 4 and 5 need to be fully done and for now they are about 14 pages, if you need to add more please let me know.
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